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Dancing [WIP]

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Here's an undersketch of Vinyl and Octavia dancing. I'm hoping to get the lineart done this week and be done before the end of the month, I want to take this one slow and get it perfect.

That said, :iconelegantmisreader: pointed out that this was cool in and of itself with all the neon colors. So I'm posting it.
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I really like both the idea/concept of the drawing and how it looks so far.

There are two things I would have done differently.
1. Octavia's dress, that is just based on taste nothing else.
2. Vinyl Scratch's hair, when she is wearing the hat, it seems a bit weird that her hair still stands up like that?
It would make more sense if it was flattened a bit under her hat. (hope you understand)

Now I'm just wondering if you are OK with me downloading this, making some changes (my own version) couloring and stuff, I'll cred you and stuff, and I might not even uppload it.

Annyhoof, great sketch, I think I'll keep an eye on you.